video feedback...

I have showed my video to another media student and asked for feedback.

She liked my video but agreed that I need to fix the middle part's editing on the beat (piano part) This has worked out as the most difficult thing to get right in the video because when I change the editing to fix the middle part it changes the timing for my shots at the start, so I have to keep editing the whole video all over again.

Positive feedback points:

• Shots and ideas match the music and themes
• The shot pace is now faster, and keeps up with the music
• She liked the idea of the ending (going backwards)

Negative points:

• Needs to be edited to the beat better
• some parts need to be 'tidied up' to fit with the flow of the video.

I will take these points into account as I continue editing.